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Nov. 15th, 2008 04:09 pmCharacters/Pairings: DG/Cain
Rating: G
Warnings/Spoilers: post series
Summary: Cain is off to war, and writes to DG
Disclaimer: Don't own anything, but thanks for reminding me of that depressing fact
OK, I actually wrote this for an english assignment (poetry in real life),
but I figured I could at least get some legit criticism.
comments and criticism is more then welcome!
follow the cut...you know you want to....
My dearest DG
The war is long, and the men grow weary and disheartened. The only thing that keeps me from losing my mind is you. I hope to return to you soon, but I fear that this time apart will never end. But don’t loose heart, for if you do, all will be lost: I left my heart with you. “Thou art fair, my bonnie lass, so deep in love am I, and I will love thee still my dear, till all the seas run dry.” You know I am no good with words; those are the words of the poet Robert Burns.
It’s true, DG: I don’t know when along the road, but some time after you returned my heart to me, you took it back. Yet, it doesn’t hurt this time, for you did not shatter it, merely took it for safe keeping. Safe it is, for I know you will keep it in good condition, perhaps even repair it to finer condition then it was ever in before.
I am eager to return, my love, for even if you don’t feel as I do, to simply see your face will be a gift. Even if you don’t love me, my heart will still be yours.
Forever your Tin Man,
Wyatt Cain
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Date: 2008-11-16 05:08 am (UTC)*sniff*
That was so beautiful!
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Date: 2008-11-19 12:54 am (UTC)